![]() ![]() And Stephanie's "oh, I am just reading their body language". more te with those two legs" a bit irritating. I did find the treecats' repeated statements of "oh, why can't we communica. If the POV shifts throughout the story, it is less disorienting. Once I have become really tightly attuned to one POV, finding myself suddenly inside a stranger's head is a bit disconcerting. Because this book started as three stories, these major characters aren't introduced until the 1/3 and 2/3 points. It may be just my personal preference, rather than a flaw in the book, but I find it very jarring when third person omniscient narration shifts to new character not previously introduced. The reader had slight tendency to make the females whiny, but it wasn't so bad I had to stop listening. I liked it, but I think it feels cobbled together. ![]()
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